巧用定语从句扩写高考作文


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发布时间:2017-05-25 21:30:00
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内容提要:在书面表达中,题目往往要求考生适当增添细节。本文从定语从句开始,试从语法与功能的角度,分析如何运用语法结构增添细节,欢迎提供更多想法和建议。

一、增加所述主题的特征

1. 互联网是一种扩大我们视野的好工具。

The Internet is a good tool.

The Internet is a beneficial tool.

The Internet is a beneficial tool which/that can broaden our horizons.

2. 博物馆是一个人们可以得到教育和娱乐的地方。

People can get educated and entertained in the museum.

The museum is the place where people can get educated and entertained.

3. 王老师正是我能够向其寻求帮助的老师。

Miss Wang is just the teacher whom I can ask for help/turn to.

二、增加所述主题的重要性或结果

4. 我容易与他人相处融洽,这对于志愿者是重要的。

I can easily get along well with others.

I can easily get along well with others, which is important for a volunteer.

5. 他成功赢得了这个竞赛,这使他父母非常高兴。

He succeeded in the competition.

He succeeded in the competition, which made his parents very happy.

He succeeded in the competition, which delighted his parents a lot.

6. 嘉莉兴高采烈地回到家,她的男朋友非常惊奇。

Carrie reached home in high good spirits.

Carrie reached home in high good spirits, which made her boyfriend very surprised.

Carrie reached home in high good spirits, which surprised her boyfriend a lot.

三、缩小所述主题的范围

7. 到外国读书的小孩将会有一个好的机会去体验一个不同的文化。

Children who/that study abroad will have a good opportunity to experience a different culture.

8. 广告经常促使人们购买他们不需要的东西。

Advertisements often urge people to buy things which/that they do not need.

9. 凡愿意参加活动者可到班长处报名。

Anyone who is willing to take part in the activity goes to your monitor and sign up for it.

四、as引导的非限定从

10. 正如期望的那样,我们班赢得了这次篮球比赛。

As is expected, our class won the basketball match.

11. 众所周知,广州是一个有着许多名胜古迹的美丽城市。

As is known to all, Guangzhou is abeautiful city with lots of places of interest.

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